After a long two months of me just being plain damn lazy, and then about two weeks of on-and-off work, I FINALLY have finished the re-write of Majuu's "pilot" chapter!!
Well, you all voted for it, so please tell me what you think! I know that there are probably some bad areas, but I will say if you want to see "BAD" go look in the scraps section where the original "three" chapters are posted (yes, this "pilot" chapter covers all three of those "chapters" I wrote years ago).
It is a bit.... Violent... So... As much as I don't WANT to, I'm putting up "mature content" on it, just because Maz is... well, you'll find out, hahaha.
Bonus points to whoever can guess what the fictitious countries' real-life counter parts are!
I could go on and on about stuff and changes from the original version to this one, but I think I'll save that for questions in the comments. And before anyone asks: Yes, there are some things I still HAVEN'T explained in the story yet because I just didn't feel like explaining how EVERYTHING works just quite yet. The basic picture is down though!
Cheers!! Wooo!! ...or "Kanpai" or whatever the bloody hell you want it to be! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Maz, Suzu and other related characters belong to me. Copyright I guess, but I think you have to get a special license for that. Bottom line is: Please don't steal any characters or ideas, that's mean man, .
I still have to actually read this, (School computers aren't letting me) but as for the copyright thing, it's protected due to some internet copyright laws. No license needed.
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The world will be Nomad's. End of discussion.
~Those who live by the sword get shot by those who don't.~
There's too MUCH text?! Hahahaha.
It's only fourteen single-spaced pages, c'moooooooon.
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~~~Kenta
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The world will be Nomad's. End of discussion.
~Those who live by the sword get shot by those who don't.~
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~~~Kenta
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The world will be Nomad's. End of discussion.
~Those who live by the sword get shot by those who don't.~
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~~~Kenta
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The world will be Nomad's. End of discussion.
~Those who live by the sword get shot by those who don't.~
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~~~Kenta
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The world will be Nomad's. End of discussion.
~Those who live by the sword get shot by those who don't.~
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